Example letter
275 words
An undergraduate applying full time. Invented applicant and firm.
About the right length for one page.
Dear Northbridge Partners Recruiting Team,
I am a senior at the University of Michigan studying economics, and I am applying for the Associate Consultant role in Northbridge's Chicago office. For the past two years most of my time outside class has gone into solving problems for small businesses, and I want to do that work full time.
Two conversations made Northbridge my first choice. At your campus event in September, Dana Lee described a first-year consultant on a hospital project presenting her own analysis to the client's finance chief. When I followed up, Dana told me the Chicago office staffs new hires on both health care and consumer work in their first year, which is the range I want before I choose a direction.
As project lead in our student consulting club, I worked with a family-owned bakery chain that was losing money on catering. I built a cost model order by order and found that deliveries under $150 lost money once driver time was counted. I proposed a $150 minimum with a delivery fee below it. The owner adopted it, and catering margin rose from 4% to 11% the next quarter.
I also work 15 hours a week as a shift lead at a campus café, where I schedule eight student staff. When we kept running short on Friday mornings, I compared two months of sales with the schedule and moved one shift from the afternoon. Our wait times at the busiest hour fell, and overtime hours dropped by a third.
I would bring the same habit to Northbridge: start from the numbers, then check them with the people closest to the work. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Priya Shah