Example letter
275 words
A junior applying for a summer analyst role. Invented applicant, bank and deals.
About the right length for one page.
Dear Harrow & Vale Recruiting Team,
I am a junior at Indiana University studying finance and accounting, and I am applying for the Summer Analyst program in Harrow & Vale's Industrials group in New York. Industrials is the sector I have studied most closely.
I came to banking through one deal. Last spring our investment club followed the sale of a pump maker to a larger competitor at about 11 times EBITDA. I rebuilt the buyer's case from its filings and saw that most of the premium rested on expected cost savings. I want to do the work behind that number: the model, the comparable deals and the case a board signs off on.
When I spoke with Maya Brooks, a second-year analyst in your Industrials group, she told me analysts there build the first draft of the model on sell-side deals and present pages to clients by their second year. Your sale of a regional packaging company to a private equity buyer this year is the kind of mid-market process I want to learn first.
This summer I interned in the finance team of a family-owned building supply distributor with $80 million in revenue. The owners were weighing an offer for one of their four branches. I built a three-statement model of the branch and found that its margin depended on one contractor who made up 30% of its sales. The owners used my numbers to ask for an earn-out tied to that customer, and the sale closed on those terms.
I would bring careful modeling, a real interest in industrial companies and the habit of checking every number before it leaves my desk. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Daniel Okafor